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I feel like the first couple had no substance at all. I see people complain about the art, but the art is fine, guys, chill out. My main issue is with the writing. For the first couple, we don't actually know the seme at all. Yeah, he's rich and doesn't wanna marry and nice and stuff, but it's just weird that one of the supposed MCs feel like a background character. Which is why I was actually rooting for the blonde one at first. It just went on without really showing why the main uke liked the main seme so it was just a bit cringe.
The second story was eh. I liked it better than the first, but I feel like this was a twilight type situation wherein the author made a more likeable 2nd ML at the beginning and then had to make him do something horrible to justify the main uke's choice of the main seme. And it was weird at first with the switch up, but I just accepted it as a last resort to give the 2nd ML something. So it was fine until they suddenly turned 2nd uke into an omega when they were already doing just fine. It's like, you spent all these chapters breaking societal expectations and that it doesn't matter the secondary gender, only to destroy it completely at the last second by turning them generic. Idk. I can't complain much since I did read this stuff for free, but the art is fine, even though people seem to hate it.
I'm pretty sure the author could've done better without the limitations, I just wanted to get to know the first seme more.
This! I got so confused why we're investing so much on the blond guy when the baby daddy is literally the ML???? Like I know that he's a set up for different couple but like bro focus on your main one first.... We barely know anything! Other than he's hot and he's nice! And yes rich but anyway as a reader we can't connect at all..... I ended up skipping a bunch of chapter with the blond guy because I was being impatient....
Also when uke told the seme (yeah my dumbass already forgot their names) he was married seme had a flashback from his childhood where his mom was saying that his dad cheated on her and that seme should not end up like his father but then in the sort of(?) writer's note at the end of season 1 we see both seme's mom and dad together and normal (like no hostility between them) we also don't know what happened to the uke's father. Also in the writer's-ish note the seme's parents did not seem keen on the idea of seme getting married but during season 1 it was implied lot that his mom wanted him married to the point of setting him in blind dates.The story really lacked consistency to the point even the uke's mole switched sides from left to right at some point
I barely trudged through reading it, but I just gotta drop it. I can't do this anymore
Your assistant got stabbed bro stop magic carpet riding