I am only a few chapters in and I keep cackling bc this author cannot draw hands and feet to save their life (this isn’t me talking down bc same tbh, drawing hands and feet are hard, it does not come easily to me either and i can RELATE) but it just makes me laugh every time I look at them
I agree with the feets but they can draw hands really good but most time they just don't put the effort on drawing hands and feets cuz those are not the main focus for her and honestly I can feel it must be extremely exhausting to drawing every detail perfectly every panel (╥﹏╥)
“i can’t tell him yet” BITCH JUST TELL HIM ALREADY, YOU ARE TESTING MY PATIENCE
everything chase is telling him should be more than enough to make him comfortable with the fact that chase wants him to be his forever partner (literally already insinuating he wants to be his one and only in so many diff ways), like yeah okay finding out he has a son may be a bit overwhelming but i don’t see how that’s avoidable?? it doesn’t matter if u tell him later or now so just do it now bc he’s gonna be shocked either way. overall chase will just get over the initial shock and then just be happy that it’s him. I hope the author doesn’t drag make the uke overly annoyingly overthink it and drag it all out.
testing
I know a lot of ppl want the seme to come save the uke but i kinda like the idea of him ending lister himself especially after he killed that sweet child. let him not be a damsel, and avenge the kid himself. that being said, i’m sure the seme will come anyways. all I know is lister needs to be tortured and killed.
idk whether to chalk it up to character stupidity or bad writing (for this specific chapter bc the storyline is great) but that redhead makes no damn sense, literally saying he wanted to apologize and then starting a fight for literally no reason like huh??? just annoying as hell.idk this chapter just felt annoying af. anyways gimme my babies being lovey dovey in the next chap
it’s a rlly good story so far. kinda slow burn tho tbh, I mean if we think about it, they haven’t moved forward in their relationship much even though the chemistry is there. I mean sure they’ve kissed and stuff but there is no establishment of feelings towards one another. It feels like a lot of their intimate scenes get cut short too. overall still good tho.
the bit with the sister was very emotional and the twist of her being the one to have answered miyako was so lovely
this story isn’t bad per se but i feel like it took such an odd turn with the time travel stuff. i thought it was just a regular royal omegaverse story and then BAM halfway thru, time travel gets incorporated and it feels so random???
kinda wish one of them would confess already so the other would follow. like they’re pretty much acting like a couple already and being extra affectionate and cute but they won’t take that final step of confessing and I’m like “ONE OF YOU SAY SOMETHING ALREADY”… (〜￣△￣)〜
seme being like “don’t sleep with other people, it makes me jealous” and the uke being like “i would hang out less with my bestie who has a crush on me if you asked me to because i care more about your feelings than his” like they both kinda kinda are admitting it to one another already but aren’t and i feel like that ‘now kiss’ meme of the stickman forcing two ppl in a ship to kiss but in this case, it’s to officially confess.
also it’s super cute and funny to see the uke get more honest with his feelings and become more physically affectionate and attached. the seme was so used to the one sided affection that to see the uke be so open now is throwing him off lmao. I feel like he lowkey thinks the uke is sick or something lol.
I actually can’t wait for them to be an couple already bc they’ll probably be so much better at communicating and their affection will increase tenfold.
…. so anyways I LOVE the au and I wouldnt mind reading a bunch of different scenarios with this couple as if they were fanfics (authorfics? lol) because i love them so much and do not mind reading them in diff universes. i hope the author continues with a bunch more! I’m ready! give me a zombie au, a prince/knight au, give me all of it!!
OMG!! I totally agree with you. They could even do an animal AU where one of them are prey and the other is a predator, like in Prison Breakfast where the MC is a fox and the ML is a snake. I really think you’re onto something there
Or they could do a normal one that just shows their life in China..? .-. I thought the side stories were going to focus on both couples different lifestyles in China, Seong-room and Je-oh could have even rescued an orphan child or saved one that was also being put through prostitution/was going to be put through it.. but HELL NO it didn’t go that way why mpreg Evy..?
**Seong-rok
please go be a debbie downer on someone else’s comment as there are others who already agree with you in this comment section instead of trying to rain on others parade. as you can see that’s what I did with my own comment, without going to the replies to other people that think different than me or kistoneee. don’t get me wrong, I wouldn’t have minded a side story that focused on their life free everything they went through (I do not care for the side couple), heck — i would’ve loved it! again I’ll take anything besides a large agr gap au (in which case I just wouldn’t read it and move on), but there is nothing wrong with the author wanting to do an au either especially as it doesn’t affect the canon main story whatsoever. I understand it not being up to everyone’s tastes, that’s valid but some of you are being way too whiny and acting like it in any way affects the main storyline or it’s the end of the world, and it doesn’t bc it’s an entirely separate universe and the author very well could STILL do another side story that does focus on their new runaway life later, it’d still a possibility. mpreg is interesting and cool to some ppl, those ppl being us. you can go unhappy and bond over that with someone else please. no need to try and shove your opinion down the throat of the rest of us who are fine with it.
I mean ‘than me and MSG*’ wrote the wrong username initially. sorry.
Mpreg’s disgusting and disturbing. Sorry not sorry
@NaluuRobyn I’m guessing you must’ve blocked me on MY own comment even though you interjected yourself in here because it’s telling me I can’t reply to you due to user settings. but you don’t have to be sorry for thinking that? this is what I don’t get with you people. YOU ARE the ones going to other people enjoying it and getting mad at us instead even when you’re not being attacked for thinking differently. it’s your behaviour being criticized bc you guys can’t just be normal about your own opinions. LITERALLY there is a person by the username of moonpie under me who says they hate it and instead of bonding with them, you both choose to come to MY comment and spread negativity. your BEHAVIOUR is disgusting and disturbing, sorry not sorry. blocked back.