It's a cute story but my only complaint is the sudden name change mid-way through. It confused me because I had just gotten used to the names and then it just changed.
Like ty for not ending the season with his empty apartment cuz that shit had me thinking he did a lil SMTH to himself BUT ALSO HOW CAN YOU END A SEASON RIGHT AS THEY MEET AGAIN
The beginning is good but midway through the protagonist starts acting like he's got 8th grade syndrome with evil cackling, hand covering face type sh!t. Also I'm very much uncomfortable with characters having children's bodies yet dressing mature.. like why would you draw that unless you want pdf file fans. Don't give me that "oh but she's over 200 years old" bullsh!t.
Dropped after ch 49.
Translation isn't the best, with the wording sometimes being confusing or, for example, the entirety of ch22 being in Chinese. Female characters are only there for fan service and harem pretty much. No personality. Everyone is throwing their (grand/)daughters at the protagonist, even selling them to him as a transaction condition.
No consistency when it comes to ripped clothes(fanservice) either, them holes be teleporting all around the clothes just to reveal more cleavage or sideboob.
Protagonist is also pretty much every generic male mc in one when it comes to this type of genre except with hints of misogyny added in. Who would've guessed THAT when women are only sex symbols here lmao. (adding a quote by mc "women are always a hassle when emotional")
Polyamorous relationships DO exist, it just takes a bit more effort than monogamous relationships. The author is just showing us that Jan does love BOTH of them EQUALLY. They showed us this with Jan and Jamil as the focus, and then as Jan and Pray as the focus. It's simple... Now I just want to see Jamil and Pray as the focus
To make this simple, Bottom loves Top A, the author shows that. Bottom falls in love with Top B, the author is now showing us that it isn't just sex but actual love. Just like with Top A.
The thing is they only work if everyone is in complete agreement, Jamil and Pray don’t even like each other. Their over here taken digs at each, so there’s bound to be negative feeling sprouting that makes this ploy relationship turn to crap. If someone is not completely comfortable in where they stand it doesn’t work.
I do realize that, which is why I said that a polyamorous relationship just takes more effort in order to work, and it is why I'm looking forward to the development between Pray and Jamil.
I don't really like how mc is such a pushover. Especially because he's an omega. Aren't they supposed to be extremely aware of their surroundings because they are easily targeted? Especially around alphas?? It's like he has all this experience already but then acts so clueless to very obvious flirting/sexual tension. Its so contradictory IMO and makes it feel like he's just playing someone clueless instead of actually being so.
Also it plays into the "omegas=sl×ts, they take anyone with the slightest scent of pheromones" type of trope a bit too much for my personal liking. Not even going into how obvious it is that he's an omega just from the design. If he looked a little more like a beta I could maybe believe it if he claimed to be an alpha.
I'm all for poly but for now(chapter 56) it just seems like he's going around doing anyone in the group with little to no thought about the way it could affect relationships within the group. Wasn't his character built on the fact that he cares a lot about keeping them all together and his subgender not getting revealed? It feels like that's just been forgotten or it's just used as an afterthought?
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