If you don't mind a story with a fairly slow pacing, then this is a good story to read.
This could have been a decent story, I like the concept, but unfortunately the system break the story for me. Tired of story with system that just give the MC everything he need, it make everything else seem pointless because you know the system will be there to save the day.
I tried looking at the chinese version, and they only became friend at chapter 40, and as the latest chapter at 54 currently, they have not progressed farther then that.
Thank you for this. I guess I won't be reading this for now
I really would like to be excited for this, but I have seen to many author butch their story in recent years to chase modern trend, to trust a story will be good from just a few chapters.
Also, I hope the author will not let Layla die for drama, I really would like to see the story develop with both sisters supporting each others.
Fr sometimes cliche happy end...is what readers need...we already got stress from real world.. don't make fantasy adding your stress
System is always BS in a story, always there to give free stuffs to MC with little to no effort.
Not only that, but system never make sense from the beginning, where do the system come from? Who's in control? and all that. I do expect fantasy story to be realistic, but I expect story to explain stuffs, and when stuffs appear out of nowhere without explanation it is bad writing.
The girl the MC liked got raped > MC get power out of nowhere> MC want revenge on the guys that raped the girl he liked > MC start raping girls...
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What could he do? They had his hands tied with blackmail and raping his CHF. His first logic was to just kill them in his one off attempt but let's be honest, it wouldn't have gotten him far at all not to mention he be in jail, so a demon shows up and give him a better opportunity to get Karma. Not ideal but at least he'll get his own satisfaction from the pain he endure from them slowly but surely.
Technically from the beginning she could be considered partially blind because she was able to see to some extent because of magic. Then her blindness is fixed later on in the story, that's really disappointing for me and made this story go from 5/5 to 3/5.
I think in technicallity, she is still "blind" in a sense. since her magic is to "see". it's a passive, but i wonder if she would loose it some how again. But yea i get you though it was a liiitle bit dissapointing that she could see again. I wished her girft would be an "upgrade" but litterally they gave her the "max upgrade" right away xD But im glad she can finally see her pretty world.
Most of those who are blind can still see, full blindness is very rare, it's more common for those who are blind to be partially blind. She is still blind, partially blind, she is just using other ways to see.
Among all the shitty harem out there, it's nice to see one that's done right.
Every males characters have their own feeling, and you can see how their feeling develop and change with times. Also, the males do not suddenly become a blank character after they entered the harem and keep their importance in the story.
All that is lacking in majority of harem, which is why I usually hate harem.
Seeing that, this seem like a story that will be going for a really long times. I am not sure if this is a good thing or not.
Story was not perfect, but it had good points, and the author not dragging the story was also good. Overall I can recommend this, it is a good fairly short story.