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It's very obvious that the translator's first language isn't English. Keeping that in mind, the storyline is good. Please keep in mind it might be difficult to read if you aren't good at filling in context by yourself.
I can't believe I only took a day to read this whole story line. The mangaka and the writer are amazing! Legitimately was so good I couldn't put it down. This is what I mean when I say porn with plot is best.