Like cmon guys, read the first chapter. This has been a redflag story from the start
The smut in this is genuinely so good wtf, like sometimes it's just fucking but down to the prep and the fucking it's so intimate
Compared to other ones with this trope this one gets an
8/10
Parenting: 10/10 i love that the Omega worries so much for his kid and spoils him. It's so refreshing to see a kid not made as an accesory for the parents drama but the sole reason why his dad does so much for him.
Plot is an 8/10 nothing extraordinary but it's honestly great. Usually I'd feel frustrated and straight up just feel like it's stupid to go through with not telling the alpha. But the stakes here are highhh. Like yeah the kid will be used as an inheritance pawn, but i dont think the alpha will do that though, and the wrong people are finding out. But it gives one -1 point for making the sister the devil.
Details i like are!! The alpha gets introduced with his child early on and the fact that he seems to care. Let's be real, he's a huge piece of shit but seeing his upbringing it's not that surprising I'm looking forward to his character development where he becomes worthy of his family.
Now for the things i dont like;
The sheer amount of nonecon?! Diabolical. I feel bad for the omega bcs he sleeps w/ one man and now his life is fucked over and basically trapped him in a constant state of heat. Stupid for the alpha at that moment to sleep with him knowing his self control too, like he was on his right mind he could have literally just sent him to a hospital or something.
But yk who's worse? The date. BECAUSE WTF DO U MEAN YOU RELEASED UR PHEROMONES ON THE SECOND DATE WHEN OPPORTUNITY TOOK, KNOWING U WOULD SEND HIM IN A CONSTANT STATE OF HEAT? Atleast with the ML he induced none of it and took the fall on all situations after the heat..
It seems pretty irresponsible of them tbh that we barely see them hang out with the kids, i understand in the alphas part he's an amnesiac and well it would be pretty traumatic for ur dad to just forget about you... but gyuha??? Dawg why are you signing up for ur job when u should be taking care of ur kids esp bcs hello??? They dont even see eachother at home any more???? What was the author thinking???? And Chayoung with 0 initiatize to meet his children or even show an inkling on interest in them is fucking dissapointing, set aside for the plot the children feel like accesories and a missed plot point. There's so many missed opportunity with exploring the kids reactions too, the angst potential... Instead we have gyuha going to a birthday party (bro ur kids havent seen u for ages), Chayoung more interested in sex than being responsible. God wtf is this author cooking it's straight up bullshit slop. How can you introduce a baby, another character, a new family member and throw them out the face of the earth when it's convenient like wtf
