I agree with the people saying the sex scene made it really shallow, I wish we explored more if these two would be afraid the friendship would be ruined if they dated, I hate how it was reduced to.. ya know.. her liking him because of his physical body and not him for who he is. Like.. it felt so shallow.
I've been waiting my whole life fpr a beta top and alpha bottom but this really disappointed me, the fact I was uncomfortable the entire time reading the chapter because alpha clearly is in so much pain and the author is putting so much focus on the fact he's uncomfortable. The beta is just really pushy and kept going in despite the alpha stating multiple times that it hurts. Beta better not try pushing him to do that if alpha doesn't want to, I'm this close to drop their story.
I think we have a different view on things on what went down, but I completely see where you’re coming from!! I see it as more of him exploring and experiencing newer things that went outside of his values from his upbringing as a child. As someone who read the raws, I can affirm that although the beta is naturally pushy for his personality, he takes it slow to accommodate to the alphas unfamiliarity of the whole situation—trust me, he does not find comfort in his distress
Bro, not respectfully.. go outside and touch grass, I do have my own opinions on disliking things of this bl but I never complained because I'm willingly continuing to read it. you seriously spent how long maybe a week to post this long ass list only for NOBODY to waste their time reading, not only that you seriously got few bls in the mix that are AS PROBLEMATIC AS JINX, please go outside bruh.
Yall I cannot with those thinking fishy is a minor, he isn't and it was confirmed in the comic itself, he's just in high-school to learn how to speak, read and write, fishy is an adult who have been living his entire life in a huge fish tank so his language and reading is poor, that's why the technically school nurse helped him to get into the higher to learn these things.











I haven't read this yet because I'm the type to met a story marinate, but don't give up KTs !! There are lots of careless people who enjoy bullying others just because they don't get consciousness or they are behind a screen, your art seems pretty decent abd far from ugly judging by the cover. do not let these haters win !! I know you can go through it but no pressure at all ! Take all the time you need to feel better <33
Thank you for all this kind words... means a lot to me ╥﹏╥