I haven't read this yet because I'm the type to met a story marinate, but don't give up KTs !! There are lots of careless people who enjoy bullying others just because they don't get consciousness or they are behind a screen, your art seems pretty decent abd far from ugly judging by the cover. do not let these haters win !! I know you can go through it but no pressure at all ! Take all the time you need to feel better <33
I agree with the people saying the sex scene made it really shallow, I wish we explored more if these two would be afraid the friendship would be ruined if they dated, I hate how it was reduced to.. ya know.. her liking him because of his physical body and not him for who he is. Like.. it felt so shallow.
I've been waiting my whole life fpr a beta top and alpha bottom but this really disappointed me, the fact I was uncomfortable the entire time reading the chapter because alpha clearly is in so much pain and the author is putting so much focus on the fact he's uncomfortable. The beta is just really pushy and kept going in despite the alpha stating multiple times that it hurts. Beta better not try pushing him to do that if alpha doesn't want to, I'm this close to drop their story.
I think we have a different view on things on what went down, but I completely see where you’re coming from!! I see it as more of him exploring and experiencing newer things that went outside of his values from his upbringing as a child. As someone who read the raws, I can affirm that although the beta is naturally pushy for his personality, he takes it slow to accommodate to the alphas unfamiliarity of the whole situation—trust me, he does not find comfort in his distress
Bro, not respectfully.. go outside and touch grass, I do have my own opinions on disliking things of this bl but I never complained because I'm willingly continuing to read it. you seriously spent how long maybe a week to post this long ass list only for NOBODY to waste their time reading, not only that you seriously got few bls in the mix that are AS PROBLEMATIC AS JINX, please go outside bruh.











okay I usually don't comment on thigs like this because I can't even bring myself to get last the first chapter.. BUT WHAT IN THE FUCK DUDE, like I knew something is weird going on from hpw to snag an alpha the omega looked really suspicious to me that I couldn't finish the story, now this shit where the use looks like he's a fucking 7 year old.. keep this guy away from children fr. You can manage to make a character cute without making them look like a child.