I'm so pissed she suddenly became stupid, like she was so confident and smart before the secret choice
ALSO I hate the fact that we never get to see the love interests' reactions to their past life as much bc they all die, like i love the idea of horrible ppl regaining their memories of past lives but this one did it so horribly bc they find out and then immediately die afterwards.
Also Fedrick is a sucky ml, and also is just as toxic as the rest of them im gonna be so fr, just bc he hasn't done anything doesn't mean crap bc he clearly said that he does wish to do it
Lowkey couldn't get past the first few chapters, there was literally no point in having a transmigrator as it barely adds anything to the story and that one chapter with Rykard when she tries leaving him was actually so cringy
She's rlly stupid and acts so innocent and it's rlly weird. She acts like she doesn't know anything about the story yet gives full ass descriptions about the characters and how they relate to the villainess like tf.
Also who is this oompa loompa looking ass fugler, no point in having a character like that, actually pisses me off every time I see that disgusting thing in the comic.
It wouldve been way more interesting if we just had the original villainess and got to see her change and have ppl realize she was being used, also having the priest come into action just feels useless bc we can't get any of og haley's actual feelings which would've been 100x more interesting.
Damn bruh, I could say that was a pretty harsh comment/opinion but hat's off to you, respect
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I read more on a different website but the god awful romance made me drop it, it feels so cheesy and forced PLUS the dynamic between Cedin and the mc is horrid tbh. Like i'd rather her just date the demon king because even that has better dynamic than wtv is going on between her and Cedin. It also has the stupid trope of "oh strong buff girl is super stupid when it comes to love" and like I get it but this one in particular is done super poorly to the point I actually get ticked off whenever the mc processes romance. I wish they leaned more into the horror of romance being forced onto the characters like what happened with the crown prince because that makes a lot more sense with the system and etc. Ik Cedin is implied to be the glitch in the system but that just seems like bad writing imo because it feels like it'd eventually end with mc hating him because he's the reason why she's stuck there in the first place rather than at home not this corny lovey dovey crap. Also cedin is absolutely insufferable, I usually like puppy love but ts is actually so unbearable. Both of the two main love interests have the worst possible tropes in existence and written so poorly. Like the crown prince is obv supposed to be annoying but he has that stupid yandere-tsundere type of love that pisses me off, and somehow Cedin still takes the money of being the most annoying love interest.
Wdym "We both weren't perfect" like oh yeah Kim Dan smokes and he kept things hidden but Jaekyung r@ped him! So they both were hurting each other... ! Like stfu, every fan needs to stop riding this authors dih man
The author is rlly good and does have the capability of making good stories and character arcs as we’ve seen thru side couples and other stories, they rlly just picked up more than they could chew with jinx and totally dropped the ball.
I hope in the future there's multiple chapters of the mc fixing every single misunderstanding, I think that'd be hilarious
I hate everyone except for all the heroes chat... I need a side story where they're all dead and just living peacefully together in the afterlife with no wars or anything </3
This the dumbest shit ever, if I found out the guy who i've been falling for was the reason for the glitches, i'd actually kill him, wtf is this girl doing.
Also I pray to the gods that she finds out he's still just as horrible even if he's not in the system because he's thought the exact same things as the other mls, he just never acted on them because "he's different than those disgusting perverts" like no. That's still creepy and weird to even THINK about doing that shit
So you mean that you wanted her to still be bounded by the system, where the "OGML" who was supposed to free the both of them from that hell, was doing everything to make her suffer because he thought she was responsible for his suffering?!!! Be for real!!!
You be saying the wild sh¡t ever!!!
He may have thought that for a moment but never acted on that. And never did anything that could harm her in any ways. Comparing him to them is sick as fụck.
You being against the system being broken. How did you want her to escape from that?!
Girl what r u on, that's like saying "Oh i was thinking of torturing you and locking you up so you are forever mine but then I decided I have a moral high ground compared to everyone else who did actually torture you so i'm actually the good guy!"
And all i'm saying is that if I found out the guy I liked was the root cause for glitches in the system and the reason behind a lot of this insanity, I would reasonably be fucking pissed.
Also never said the beginning part LOL
I just wished she wasnt acting as stupid as she was rn, like bffr suddenly all of your logical thinking and critical thinking skills get thrown out the window when you get a secret pathway? She acts completely fine when she got tortured by the other ml's in every single route and yet when we're in the final round she suddenly acts like a scaredy cat
Girl be for real, my first comment was a supposition asking if that’s what you were implying because your argument was that out of touch! You completely missed the point of his character. Having intrusive thoughts forced on you by the system vs actively fighting your own mind so you NEVER harm her are two completely different things!
The other 5 MLs gave into Vidar’s curse and literally tortured and murdered her. Trying to compare someone who literally suppress those urges and protect her with actual abusers is insane!!!!
And being "fucking pissed" at him for the glitches is wild when those glitches are literally the ONLY cheat code breaking Vidar’s cursed loop! The glitches are what opened the secret route in the first place. Without them, she’d be trapped in an endless death cycle forever. You’re mad at the literal key to her escape!!!
Calling her "stupid" and a "scaredy cat" is a crazy take!!!! She didn't lose her critical thinking skills, she’s heavily traumatized after being murdered 5 routes in a row!!!!!!! Every single time she thought a route was safe before, it turned into a nightmare. Now she’s in a glitched secret mode with zero retries left!
Expecting a heavily abused victim to just chill out and act fearless in the final round makes no sense whatsoever!!!
You literally cannot tell somebody who’s disabuse to just get it together…. Sorry that’s not how trauma works and that’s not how psychology works. Also, you’re telling me you’ve never had a dark thought a day in your life that you were then like oops actually we shouldn’t do that. That’s bad. You’re a liar if you’re telling me that you’ve never had a dark thought.. thought crimes are not a thing what makes him better is the fact that he acknowledges the fact that he’s thinking that way, and then deciding to go against it. Now you’re right and saying that thinking that is weird as hell but it’s not a crime. At least not on the level that you’re trying to portray it as
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