So I haven’t read this since the 10th chapter and just read the newest chapter. This definitely leaves a bad taste in the mouth, what do you mean it just got glossed over so fast??? This was supposed to be a pretty big plot point over in what feels like 2 chapters-ish. The rage you get from reading this, just like the og story….
wdym not his story anymore? lol stop justifying the author, yes its not love is an illussion(hyesung's story) ,its still hyesung's life experience. Saying that it's not hyesung's story anymore doesnt justify that, if the author just didn't use hyesung's trauma and pasts i wouldn't have a problem. The point is, the author should think of different way/plot to make byul's and siwoo's be closer, heck the author can even use siwoo's past and make him pitiable character since he's poor then byul will be protective or notice siwoo more than just a friend(sure it would make byul see siwoo as someone he should protect or such, just anything but use hyesung's past as a plot material) but its better than make a plot that relates to byul's MOTHER trauma/past. ALSO! what happened in the past about hyesung running away after giving birth to him shouldn't matter as much since Byul admits that he actually didn't mind, but he still use that just to hurt his mother?omg im getting mad again, like what did he know? the author could also use that as a plot for so that byul will actually know what happened at that time if he's so pressed about it.in my conclusion, Its best to not use hyesung at all as a plot material, it just give a bitter taste, especially when the author use it so that the two will have romantic development. In my opinion, i think the author is rushing things to much.
reading the latest chap makes me just so angry, im gonna drop this, this story is not my vibe, if anything changes in the future sure i might rr this again. I just like hyesung so much that the author's way of using his trauma as a plot makes me sm angry.
ps. im an author myself, and i couldn't imagine using my character's trauma just for the main character's romantic development. Sure i can kill my characters, at least with dignity lol









I read like two or maybe three chapters at the beginning disgusted from the cheating. Went to the comments hoping for some redemption for the beta dude because of the alpha dudes disgusting despicable behaviour. Only to find out it gets worse and that the ending is shit. I then unfortunately decide to read the last chapter. I am absolutely disgusted with this whole fucking ass story. Someone wrote a comment about this whole thing being rage bait… it must be. I have no words. I’m appalled and so incredibly disgusted. Nothing. Can excuse this kinda outcome. Save yourself the trouble and don’t read this shit. I’m actually so disgusted. Whoever wrote this, you suck