I usually love stories like this but the execution was too much! It’s clear this could’ve been three seasons long with how much they packed into both! It was so shoved tg I lost the plot partway through and just started scrolling through half of it
LITERALLY like every important plotline was wrapped so hastily.... like how did that 2nd ml seize power from rocrate so easily like he's literally an immortal??? what happened in that year before the banquet where they sealed the chalice?? like the emperor was preparing somethin but what is it?? what was so important about that traitor high priest running away that they had to mention it?? also how did the saintess gain the temple's approval so easily when they were always portrayed as neutral?? like they always summarize the important stuff. basically, they could've made this 200+ chapters easily if it was paced appropriately......
I really thought something more was going to happen with steam bun and that friend from his class tbh!! Like the blue haired side piece dude that we never saw the face of until the end?? Totally thought they were going to get a spin off just bc I thought there were a lootttt of little scenes he appeared in the background protecting him lol
Won’t let me mark as a spoiler but know it’s somewhat a spoiler if you want to go into this very blind.
It sucks that it’s good and realllyyy fucking weird. Like a lot of scenes had me.. stopped. Why didn’t she get new clothes until the very end? She was in her high school uniform the whole time
Idk what the hell is going on with mangago but it deleted half of my paragraph ranting so just know this story is weird with the concept being a 16 year old “virgin” (mentioned multiple times) gets transferred to a demon world to have 10+ kids for the demon king in order to stop a war. It could’ve been a really good storyline if it didn’t sexualize kids so much!! I mean really. And like.. she was in her high school uniform the whole time, so this is def the authors kinks. It didn’t even make sense why she was still in that outfit when it’s shown they do have other clothes there and can MAKE clothes!! Even when she went back home, she chose to stay in her uniform?? Unlikely!! Back to the sexualization of children, it gets so weird from a baby put in a succubus outfit to them touching one of the babies “sausages” (just poking at it but still??) I did read it all and I do recommend if you’re bored and want something wack as shit that will have you questioning everything. (Like why did the demon king mention his father in the same sentence asking his 16 year old wife to sleep with him?)
I love the art style and the storyline, but she’s so fucking annoying. You’re telling me she went through 24 chapters, over 7 years of this exact same shit and she hasn’t fucking learned?? This is an unredeemable character at this point. Just divorce your husband and live in the damn forest if you can’t even rely on him.
Honestly, I felt a little sad about his ex. I completely understand he was jn the wrong and treated her badly and was using her to vent his frustration. But at the same time, she also was using him for "control" and pushed him into situations he didn't like, and I agree it was "manipulative", even if she didnt mean to be. She showed so much anger, which obviously she has every right to be, that I feel like she didn't really reflect on her actions too (not saying she owes him anything btw). Like, hopefully she also grew and won't treat her next lover the same? Relationships are about compromises, and putting not only herself but him in a situation he wasn't comfortable with *was* very selfish. Especially if she knew 1) how her peers saw him, 2) that he couldn't handle crowded areas, and 3) there would be a person there who constantly harassed both of them. It's kinda like she expected protection without the thought of protecting back? Sure, she really really needed to go to it to collect information, i just dont see how she thought it was going to be a good night I kinda hope we're able to see more jnto her and that she really is doing okay as well!
And then I was sad to learn that the red head and glasses were cousins only because I thought I was finally going to see Mr. Red genuinely care for someone! Even the "well you're cute" line had me like " he's going to show him how wrong his actions are. Mr. Red is going to grovel and grow!" But no lol.











Idk, it has really good art and a super cool plot, but I just got bored halfway and scrolled through all of it skipping most of the storyline. It feels like every little thing is explained over and over again just with a slightly different angle or point of view that doesn’t add much (to me). ( ̄へ ̄)