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hesgotthatdrip March 17, 2024 1:08 am

This ending was so anticlimactic. It was so rushed for no reason. The way the wedding guests were introduced was as if they knew these characters were forgettable. Also Beom's dream was so weirdly placed and had no resolution.They barely showed the wedding scene when it's supposed to be about their marriage. Also their suits were ugly.

All throughout the side story was a bunch of nothing. In my opinion it could have been way shorter and should've have focused more on the relationship than the smut.

I will leave with one last thing. Please go back and reread the story. The characters proportions are all over the place and look nothing like the main story's original drawings. I understand that artist's styles can evolve, however proportions still matter. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

hesgotthatdrip March 2, 2024 4:43 am

I've been keeping up with this story since the beginning. I really enjoyed the main story a lot. Now the plot feels like it's unraveling into too many directions without much resolution. This happened in Dojin & Taeju's side story as well. I can see a potential plot, but it will get in the way of another idea the author had for the direction of the side story. Does anyone else agree? ( ̄∇ ̄")

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