Look I know it's a cheating story, so their husbands are bound to make a feature here or there, but having to see her getting down with guys in the first few panels is eh
(ik the author included scenes with guys in their other stories as well, but it just pmo extra bad in this story for some reason)
I just wish her relationship with the girl was explored more early on instead of her having wet dreams about a different man...
A positive thing I would say is that the author has a very pretty art style
I really didn't hate her at the beginning of the story but near the end, she began to pmo like crazy like girl please mind your business
I'm happy she got revenge on her dad but I don't understand why she randomly turned cruel, it wasn't even done in a satisfying way. I was all for her rebelling against her family at the start, but it felt like the story randomly changed gears.
Seyeon getting such a nerfed ending made me so upset. She was abandoned by her mother and now she's abandoned again by the only person she had left AND she's still continuing to self harm??? What kinda message does that send to the viewers bro Till her very last appearance she had to feel like she was useless and that's so tough to read.
Wohn also started frustrating me at the end because she didn't get any development regarding her self image/ she still saw herself as a monster instead of learning to accept her vampirism
Atp they should've become a toxic ahh throuple. In my heart Seyeon and Wohn got back together and are actively trying to heal and be more healthy.
I know some stories are just made to be toxic, I'm not opposed to that, and obviously going in, I knew it would be unhealthy. But the ending felt so rushed and unsatisfying. It would be different if Seyeon was being evil for evils sake but her actions stemming from her trauma and insecurities, makes her ending extra sad for me.
I really did enjoy the first half of the story, I just wish the ending was better.











THIS IS SOOO GOOD, in desperate need of the next chapter.