Love how all the smut was non-consensual and then when its finally consensual it ends. (Sarcasm unless that wasn't clear) otherwise would of enjoyed the story. But no matter how u water it down its just another rape story.
Sped read it because it was so good and now im left with the unquenchable thirst for more.
Read all available chapters to be sure and can confirm the main character has 0 substance. The whole storyline is just him being hot and all powerful and amazing and fixing issues with little to no real struggle so the characters are all dry and kind of pointless. He has no real emotional content so you can literally skim each chapter and still know whats going on. “Enemy appears and overwhelms good guys…. But raul arrives just in time and saved the day! Again! And again and again and again and again”
Ok so… it would of been cute had the ML not been a grapist and then proceeded to baby trap her? This was such a weird and uncomfortable read. Wanted to like it but i kept cringing
Trigger warnings galore . Lots of unconsensual . And drugging and PTSD mentioned. Came to the comments to see warnings and saw none despite the need for them
Sooo many concerns, first off… sanitation. Second “peepee milk” …. Waht. And the naivety is just… yeah. So this exists. Not for me but it exists
This is ovulation art at its finest. The author was INSPIRED for that latest scene… phew, is it hot in here?
He is a massive red flag. I get what the author was trying to convey but… it could use a redo on the execution
Its good but the ML is a major red flag. Wanted to like him but he can suck a duck. Very well written story thus far i cant wait for the rest. I still want to like ML but also want someone to set him ablaze.
Holy great golly …this…this is something. This is something good.