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I first gave this 4 stars since there’s no 3.5 and I felt in the beginning it was more than a 3. But once I saw that it ended and that 4 chapters were side stories, I came back—-I wish I hadn’t and now it’s barely a 2 star.
I felt the story was completely rushed, even if the author wanted a bad ending for Earth Shion and have the uke be happy with Elf Shion. This was rushed way to fast and even the side stories seem half baked as well.
(for those confused) just as the Uke is linked to his parallel world self, so is Earth Shion but the only way Earth shion can visit that world is through sleeping pills and each time he took the pills he was sleeping w/ the Uke. He became attached and finally realized he had feelings for him and shouldn’t have done what he done. That’s why when he forced the uke to do a Bj, he felt bad. This was due to not only realizing his feelings, but as well as past “trauma” of boys gunning for him. Once the uke moved one, it seems like Earth shion not only became addicted to pills, he has also had been molested. I love a bad ending for a bad seme but this wasn’t done right. Ex: Back to School—perfect. I feel like this story could’ve been flushed out more —-at least 10-15 more chapters. Idk what’s happening on Jan 10/20th maybe a second season— idk but this definitely dropped the ball, which is a shame because I truly did like the story and plot building in the beginning.