I’m pretty sure we’re supposed to read this without multi pages on, so the dialogue looks like it’s being updated in real time, and we see the thrusts better hence the repeated format. BUT whoever uploaded the chapters first messed it up bad, so it’s hard to read with or without multi pages.
Regardless, this plot is outrageous. I’m sure someone out there enjoyed it, but that someone isn’t me.
Man, what was even the point of showing Monica so much in the story if she wasn’t going to even show up in the end??? It’s less about whether or not Monica meets Ginny, it’s about the buildup that led to exactly nothing with little explanation. Why even bother making Monica have an appearance at their field trip at that point???
I understand if Monica didn’t want to see Ginny due to immense guilt, but I wished the author either could’ve definitively stated that or just not have Monica be such a significant character in the story. Ginny still would’ve made the exact same choices in the story regarding her influence on Erika’s life, and the ending probably would’ve been very similar to the current one.











Ok I genuinely did not expect anyone to be endgame, let alone Kendrick (I do like him). I thought it was going to be a harem where Little A helps all sorts of species with their problems and they fall in love with him. Reading the author’s note, I’m glad that I was not wrong. I’m totally for romance, as long as the story is good, which I think it is.
I’m not sure if this is an unpopular thought, but I didn’t think Kendrick would be endgame at all if I had to guess. Idk I can’t explain it. I do 100% support them though. That’ll leave Milton left for me and the rest of us