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The plot was a mess, and the late reveal of carsens friendship with mc felt something to make up for their pairing lol, felt rushed and shallow.
BIGGER ISSUE THO WAS THE YURI, IT HAD POTENTIAL BUT THEY NEVER REALLY EXPLORED IT PLUS THEY WERE CENSORED FAKKK
only had 1 chapter side story
I find their characters far more interesting than whatever the mc had going on
Again MCs development with the other interest was rapey especially with Carsen...

WHEN U WAKW UP NEXT TO HIME IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIHHT WITH YOUR HANDS IN YOUER HEAD

Bruh why do they keep uploading over each other , it's messing up the immersion. I have to find the chapters in the right order smh smh