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OK, this should be the end of Minshit side story. All this chapter has done is certified and cemented his character for the rest of the story. The only time I want to see his existence further in the story, is when he FINALLY see our FL with Tae-ha. I rather read about Tae-ha's childhood than this lame ass carrot top. btw...WHERE IS TAE-HA'S SIDE STORY?! WE NEED TO SEE HOW HIS LIFE CAME TO BE NOW! I NEED THAT SIDE STORY NOW, DAMMIT!! WE STLL GOT BIG LOOP HOLES TO FILL! COME ON NOW! PLEASE! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
OKAY! I'M GOING TO LEAVE THIS STORY IN THE BACK COLLECTING DUST TIL THE END OF THE YEAR BECAUSE WHAT.THE.FUCK.IS.THIS.PACIIIING?!(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
1. Minshit should not be in this story no more. This is WAAAAAY too damn long. 100+ chapters in and Minshit is living rent free in Tae-ha's mind like a roach who never dies. Why do you have Tae-ha wasting more time and energy stringing this "revenge" plot? CLOSE THIS LOOSE END! NOW!
2. WHERE IS TAE-HA'S BACKGROUND STORY DAMMIT?! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
3. The smut scenes is not smutting lately. Either it's cut short and/or their inner monologs over take their moments together. I ONLY mean Hae-soo and Tae-Ha. The art is ALWAYS arting in this story. Like the next chapter after this should be them going at it, START TO FINISH. WITH PASSION! Tae-Ha is about to be gone for a whole MONTH! I want to SEE how much they're going to miss each other. I need to happy kick at something at this point. （￣へ￣）