One Sided Love
good. nothing else to it, not really (that) special to me (atall lol). I forgot pretty much all of it haha i need to reread it so im marking it as want to read again.
Ochinai Otoke
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GIVE ME MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
THIS DOES NOT FEEL FINISHED AT ALL HOW DARE YOU
Development: 2/5
Plot: 4.5/5
Characters: 4.5/5
Art: 5/5
Final rate: 4/5
Doesn't feel like it should be a oneshot, wish there was more.
Oneshot
Aisare Neko wo Hantoubun
it's a little complicated in the panels at parts as if they're not spread out far enough, like it could probably be 8 chapters instead of 5. it feels like the writing was very tightly packed basically. overall it's very sweet and nice. and lovely, I would have loved to seen a more drawn out story though with the individuals. Could've gotten some more backstory for all the individuals, between tatsumi and yoh, between asatoshi and sataoshi, get a spinoff for asatoshi. I'm glad it wasn't a love triangle and it ended up as a happy throuple, they also could've dived into that dynamic a bit more with some afterstory. Overall probably a 7 or 8/10 it's really good but could've been better with some better writing. the story wasn't bad at all though. Bathroom scene with tatsumi was also very rushed feeling.
i know this was very jambled im reading at 2 am and my thoughts are everywhere sorry if anyone actually reads this lmao
Development: 3.5/5
Plot: 3.5/5
Characters: 4/5
Art: 4/5
Final rate: 4/5
Very tightly packed, could've been spread out more; I feel like there could've been more chapters with more backstory, also a bit rushed but overall 8/10 would've been higher if not for the rushed and jumbled feeling.
Poly throuple
Bending the Spoon
I WISH THERE WAS MORE AAAA
Development: 3.5/5
Plot: 5/5
Characters: 4.5/5
Art: 4/5
Final rate: 4/5
Definitely could've had more chapters and had more of a slowburn.
Very sweet
Makes you wish there was more from how quick it was.
Psychic Powers
Demian Syndrome
YES~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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