beta
definitely needed more cooking idm the 3p ending, i think it would've ended up going that way (3rd party giving them a push) but needed an epilogue or something
i think this would work better as a 20 chap story but ig the artist/studio wasn't given a big budget...
honestly, i love it initially when it was serialized (im a licensed monsterfuccer) but now that i have time to binge read again from the beginning... it felt a little underwhelming than my initial impression.
it's a good read, and the plot is okay but very shallow. the mc and ml's relationship is v. cute but i think it makes more sense if you think that they knew each other before the start of the series and had a small crush with each other. but other than that i have no complains