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I liked the story at first, but I think they need to communicate better, especially the FL. It’s totally fine to have a fetish but I feel like it’s too much. Whenever he wants to say something, she mostly just pinned him down and it not going anywhere. They should have a safe word. I felt weird when she gave him the choker as a present. She could have given him smth else to pair with so he doesn’t feel like he’s being played and used.
Its so wholesome, healthy and sweet!! I just wanna fall in love again like those cuties lol. Like other readers, I’m so glad to see they talk about sex topic. It’s so nice to see they communicate clearly and honestly with each other about readiness, contraception ^_^