MDra

This was good i'm pretty sure it was a representation of the Japanese salary men and as to why it's so grim is due to the high suicide rates due to strict parents, no real close relationship with siblings, a depressing marriage in which there are constant fights and the relationship is stale due to work being more of a priority and possibly a child who will grow to hate you due to either being pathetic or being just like their grandparents cold and strict

it's actually a good draft, story from what i saw didn't look too bad