I wanted to see the discussion on character and plot but instead everyone is hung up on dihh. Take ts dihh and now let's get to business. Starting w uke - on one hand u say he's part of "violet crime team" and on the other he act like a pathetic teen girl in love, bro can't even keep a straight face talk about being a police. Now move to scumbag seme .. getting on my nerve so unreasonable, get your feelings sort out before you act bro
Wow we are jumping from scenes to scenes. Why not story is flowing like a proper skit. One min we are here the. Skip skip skip another scene+ major dialogue skip skip skip another place tf !?
Oh... I get it... it feels like the scenes are being cut in the middle instead of the situation ending properly before another begins... I kinda get this feeling from manhuas too... like how they jumped from being in the cave to him being treated without a link between the scenes, like a knight calling out to them to imply that they were found... so it feels like the whole scene od them being rescued is missing because theres nothing serving as link between the scenes...










I can't seem to like the story no matter how much I try I can't get past 5 chapter.. should I try again? Is it good ? Worth to marinate?