beta
I kid you not, when I realized this was the last chapter and got to the end, I said "That's it?!" out loud. This had so much potential and it was just rushed so bad. I'm left feeling a bit dissatisfied, but i'd say the beginning story was really good.
An absolute 10/10 read!! Had me hooked the whole time ╥﹏╥ certainly one i'll be reading over and over