beta
So mid that it makes me irrationally angry. Written like a fan fiction with a 13 year old author. No serious thought put into the romance. Made the primary love interest unlikable and had to redeem it but making the obviously more likeable and reasonable choice do something vehemently abhorrent (and extremely out of character). We suddenly jumped from “I don’t know what my feelings are” to “I love you more than anything in this world” in like 2 chapters. Hot garbage. Straight trash.