art was incredibly good and ik the author said in their note that they thought this was very long already compared to what they initially envisioned but if anything i think this couldve been way longer. i wouldve been really interested in seeing bryn’s backstory and i wouldve loved to see a bit of their relationship after the final fight. also a little sad we didnt get to SEE the final fight. definitely couldve been a 30+ chapter series and its a shame that a lot of short stories like these dont get enough runtime to show us more, compared to a lot of really long series that overstay their welcome.










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