This had a engaging start and things were making sense almost until thomas han was said to be the mastermind. Came out of nowhere. So many plotholes and lack of good reasoning for dave's murder. I really thought that initial female manager of hers would turn out to be an accomplice in crime considering she was suspicious until we never saw her again.
The initial chapters of this manga felt like ragebait with how many people were just caricatures of evil people and then their dying being a revenge fantasy. But as you read along you see the larger picture with symbolisms and also themes of isolation and what it does to a person. Yes the villain is over the top stereotypical portrayal of a psychopath but the story is well done in terms of engagement
If anyone knows whether this has updates elsewhere please let me know. I truly hope it isn't dropped. Loved the story.
The last panel of him bending over and begging is completely off. His head is to the left while large part of his torso to the right.
Something is missing in this work. I can't put my finger on it but it lacks a factor that would make it memorable. As if the characters weren't explored enough or perhaps ohran's journey was shown to be smooth sailing even though it was told to us it isn't. Like there is a smooth transition with no problems.
Take a shot everytime they call each other brother and sister and go on to do romantic stuff together. There is so much problematic things happening in the story that I don't know where to begin. What is author's obsession with incest-non incest storyline? It's not only the main characters relationship that I have a problem with but also the fact that the second male lead is literally a lookalike of her bio brother and the fact that the ml being jealous of him because he thinks she is gonna fall in love a lookalike of her brother. The other factor is how blatantly toxic ml is and the romanticizing of all that he does. His possessiveness is so off putting. He legit was jealous even of the one female friend she made. Then lastly we have the babyfication of the fl. The small, dainty and innocent madonna who has no clue about anything and let's him drag her around.
100% agree with everything you said!!
I really loved the premise and plot of the story but the ending feels really abrupt, ending without much answers. Many of the characters were introduced but not utilised enough. Felt like author dropped them halfway. Nevertheless it was a complete page turner. Had me rooting for all the characters
I truly hope this makes a comeback. Can't believe gems like these remain incomplete
It's so exaggerated and certain panels make me feel like I am not even looking at a human
Even though the romance is between these two, the guy has chemistry even with businessman. They should be a throuple.