I feel like this kinda story is up my alley, but I guess the pacing, timing, and sex scenes weren't quite there. Not that I could do better, but LOL... I think maybe the story was a bit too short. I like the twist at the end, tho. Nice to see both of them are out of their minds lolol
Yes, everything is hot and porn is great, but tell me why I can't help but feel sorry for the little babies orz ... they're so small and cute gdi haha Σ(っ°Д °;)っ