Sigh it never gets better its just feels like the same problems around and around again. Like come on the royal family sucks they legit let your guardian use magic to bound you and now their can only be one saintess. Persinally I woukd of said then both of us can leave b/c this royal gamily is dog shit. Like why sacrifice for ppl that were letting you be mind controlled and were going to let the other saintess suffer the same fate. Idk but it seems like the author forgets their own plotlines and just never brings them up again.
I understand what the demon did but like it was never an guarantee they would let you go. Especially since the prince had her mothers heart, so i do appreciate the help. However its not really gonna save her as it reminds me of that one guy from star wars who was the spy but was helping commit genocide like kinda defeats the purpose.
Im getting tired of having these Fls being to forgiving, like why cry and moan if you're gonna forgive ppl after one sorry. It makes me feels like none of these authors know how to write a sorrowful confrontation and/or resolve it, because most of the time those big conversations are over with "I'm sorry". And personally that is not what I wanna see. I want to see people actually apologize and talk not just scream " I love you" to each other.
They give us a female that looks strong and wise and then couple chapters later they always make her the most indecisive person with no backbone. I understand its her mom but like what is your mom doing for you? Because all it seems rn is that she's looking for the next ticket to become noble again and it looks like she would even betray her own daughter to get it.
This was actually an unexpected but really enjoyable story. Now the pacing was as fast as its ending and the story left a lot of things unanswered and to be desired, but it did have an intriguing premise: Two kings that are twin brothers posing as one another in a sadistic game for control and the throne just sounds amazing. The ml & fl were also great in my opinion as the ml fought through hell to get back to the fl. While the fl even though she never forgot about him and thought about him everyday still lived her life and saw the victims as her sisters because they grew up together. Plus every major character besides the main couple is sooo bat shit crazy that I got hooked on the drama. However, the execution of it all is not that good and not well paced. I believe this is another story that had good potential but fell short on the execution.
I have the worst gut feeling that the little brother is going to become a villain or obstacle later in the future. I really hope I'm wrong and its jist a case of the author making it seem that way to the readers only to change the outcome. As i hate when children suffer because of the adults, the two brothers should love one another not become rivals.
For a short smutty story it was actually enjoyable. It was more smut than anything but still I liked it and the art. I think for it short duration it makes me not so overly critical about the plot because usually smutty messes like this love to drag on. So I would definitely come back to re-read the hot smutty mess, and I do wish we got to see them grow as a family rather than skipping to them already having two kids, which their babygirl looked so adorable.










I like the supposed second ml but I have this gut feeling it will not end well for him. And not jist getting rejected but in usual cliche fashion becomes their enemy/betrays them later on. I hope Im wrong but everything is going to nice & cliche that I can't sit well with any of the characters.