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I want to enjoy this, but the mc is really making terrible decisions for their well being and overall goal. Voluntarily serving the enemy whose had no good intentions from the start. Then, letting himself be used for a terrible trade off, which will no doubt come back to bite him in the ass due to the sheer arrogance/lack of knowledge of their situation. Time and time again, the MC is literally spouting info that you'd want to keep under wraps until furthur notice. Everyone seems to be looking to use him as a tool for combat, while mc is getting further and furthur away from their original goal (to go home). MC is so flawed it hurts to read. I'm 106 chapters in, and desperatley hoping they start thinking logically/smart for once. #－.－)
Might as well demote him from being MC to a random npc.
Mc is literally at the back end of every character atp
I'm 25 chapters in and our MC is r*tarded, other special civil agents catch onto his abilities way faster than he can. The character relationships to our MC feel so synthetic and forced. Especially with Eden and Char. The higher ups villainize or label him immediately with no explanation
Haven’t read it in a fat minute but you’re kinda forgetting everyone has been around those powers for a while and some of em even belong to families with powers so of course they’re gonna catch onto abilities faster. Our mc quite literally had days / weeks to grasp onto an unknown ability while others had years ?? You’re gonna be oblivious too if you one day suddenly develop abilities lol
Even when assessing situations he may find himself in or situations with others, he's slow on the uptake. Very duncy. He's on point sparsely