Genuinely I can't read this, not only are the two MLs ugly as shit, but the dialogue is shit too— Like, why are we monologuing every two seconds??? Why does their tones sound so stiff??? Genuinely, I could excuse the art, but this story seems so bad and the dialogue sounds like it came from a 2019 Wattpad fanfiction, it might even be worse than that ヽ(`Д´)ノ











Lowkey I kinda wanna know the mentor-san's backstory y'know? And what happened to him after prison.. I kinda feel like— he's become this way because of something and I wish we'd gotten a story on that.