*deep breath* ~ ~ ~ ~ But this story was so bad i had to. The story line was pretty blunt and straight to the point, the fact she wasn't bothered by his feelings (I mean really? They were raised together.), Not to mention he dragged her along when his father showed up. There was very little conflict with the other guy,, but honestly funny how quick he gave up tho. Oh! Not to mention that last part with her sister? That seemed like a last moment decision to add that... Anyways, sorry this was all over the place :P just wanted to say I wasted 30 minutes on this. (And While im at it... The art is a bit stiff 乁( •_• )ㄏ)
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But this story was so bad i had to. The story line was pretty blunt and straight to the point, the fact she wasn't bothered by his feelings (I mean really? They were raised together.), Not to mention he dragged her along when his father showed up. There was very little conflict with the other guy,, but honestly funny how quick he gave up tho. Oh! Not to mention that last part with her sister? That seemed like a last moment decision to add that...
Anyways, sorry this was all over the place :P just wanted to say I wasted 30 minutes on this. (And While im at it... The art is a bit stiff 乁( •_• )ㄏ)