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Idk man... I love the art, and the premise is so funny. The last story was pretty consensual well except the other guy was uh Wolfy but.... Man.. This feels rapey... Idk why every yaoi HAS to have it... The guys bloody paralyzed and he can't even talk? And he clearly is getting pissed and doesn't want it...ugh.... It was going so well too....
Bruh lit what is going on. Every plot ends in one chapter.. And like ok he's gonna just die now... Are we gonna know his back story... What happened to MC sleep walking? Everyone switches up their emotions... Like MC switched to cold hearted so fast like ok bro. Idk the art is great but the writing of this is so fucking ahh bruh