Something about this is kinda lacklustre and dull. It’s a pretty good read overall but idk. I think it’s because the side characters are very blandly written imma be honest. Hell I only remember Sherry’s name because she has blue hair and Janitor because his name is Janitor . Maybe I’m just being picky idk, but it looks like the next arc will be more interesting.
In my experience, it’s very rare for a webtoon/manga/manhwa to ever write mental trauma properly. In terms of coping mechanisms, behavioural and psychological issues. They usually come out really cheesy, illogical or end up magically becoming better due to the power of love. So I’m very curious on how they will approach it, obviously I’m not expecting details equivalent to a psychologist major but I hope the author has really done their research.
im kinda tired of people mentioning Research in regards to something that is so steaped in the personal. to write a story this raw and empathetic and thoughtful requires experience and perspective that cannot purely be gained from just Reading about a Thing in a psychology book. research can give u knowledge and ideas and is necessary for most fiction to be its best but it cant make you FEEL the pain or confusion or self loathing etc that survivors of abuse (of any kind) can go thru.
i dont know the writer's life or gender or sexuality but i do strongly feel they are pulling some of this from their own experience or soul and not just research they read somewhere or a few interviews with irl survivors (and considering the stigma it has esp wrt men esp wrt korean society, i cant imagine the writer was able to get a bunch of volunteers to spill their guts to them for a webtoon plot.) there's a saying that art imitates life. so it may well be that this is inspired either by their own life experiences, or a close friend/family member who went thru smth similar OR some combination which may or may not have been further supplemented by "research". just want yall to stop assuming like this writer could not POSSIBLY be using this story to work thru their own stuff rather than they only did lots of research thus they were able to make this story. (thats not how research works yall js). the story also seems to outright reject alot of common BL tropes for kr webtoons. which may be a coincidence or intentional. but its a big part of the story's charm and sense of reallism.
Your point is completely valid. But research isn’t just an academic term, that can only be used in descriptions of science or history etc. It means a detailed study of a subject, especially in order to discover (new) information or reach a (new) understanding. Generally, it’s very rare for a psychological BL story specifically, to be based on personal experience. However, it can be inspired by other’s who have been through it. And obviously you’d research into it or investigate meaning asking certain questions and details or if it’s too sensitive to ask you’ll find other sources to fix gaps. Otherwise, if you only know minuscule details, and don’t know the rest, it’s massive holes for a story.
The reason for why most stories in this genre fall short is because they’re not writing a (auto)biography, experience is important but can prove to limit your writing by being biased and narrow. That’s why research into other details and other experiences are important. They’re not writing a real-life based (auto)biography, they’re writing a story and most of the time it’s hand in hand with the mystery and thriller sub genre’s. Because of this, characters with mental trauma’s aren’t depicted properly and often have to be resolved by love or death. Sometimes in worse case scenarios the characters don’t even seem like they’re traumatised they’re just portrayed as ‘edgy’.
Also, experience really isn’t needed in stories that aren’t personal pieces such as memoir or autobiography. If experience was such an issue, how would authors write about dragons, elves, dwarves, magic, rebirth. Research is highly important beforehand so your writing doesn’t struggle trying to come up with ideas when you’ve realised you’ve neglected an aspect of your work due to assuming you can write it loosely based on your ‘experience’ such as hearing or reading some work that one time, but not extensively researching it.
Look I know it was for the sake of the plot but it really didn’t need to keep going on for SO LONG. At first it was cute and you’re so anxious to finally see the secret come out around the chapter 20’s but it gets dragged out for SO LONG that it honestly becomes irritating especially since the chapters itself don’t hold any value or depth (nothing necessary for the plot development) but to keep dragging on. At least make the second FL more insidious so it’d be more dramatic or something. Maybe even a second ML that tries to sweep the MC off her feet. IDK JUST GIVE ME SOME FLAVOUR.
This story is s t r u g g l i n g to pick whether it wants to be an aristocratic rebirth, a system rebirth or a murim story + interstellar dimension trading PLUS financing. It’s working out ok, but it’s kinda weird to read HAHAHA and makes certain concepts so far fetched I don’t even know what I’m reading anymore.
With how much they’re boosting him, mana, cultivation, able to buy and learn other stuff from the interstellar dimension (what’s next? MECHA? Finna come GUNS BLAZIN). He better be tryna fix a whole empire corruption and take down the corrupt emperor or be battling the demon race AND corrupt holy church
There’s a lot to unpack within the first like 10 chapters or so and it can be abit much and confusing especially if you read the summary first and was expecting for it to be immediately centric around Bira. If anyone’s planning on reading this I’d recommend to not skim through it and take your time. Because the beginning chapters are very much setting a huge stage for future massive plot points.
Bro plus or minus 20 years he’s still a FINE ASS MAN. It’s the hair, I’m telling you. Good hair and confidence is the key
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