beta
Ngl, after reading some good stories with rape that actually put effort into building the characters, this one is soo boring and just a nothing burger, also the plot is predictable, I felt Iike the author wanted to tell 5 different stories but could decide which one to go with first
First is omega verse, then the dude can see the future by game screens, then its romance rape plot, then is drug dealing, then it's pregnancy, it's like a mix of things that don't add up, and of course, the characters are immortal, the use isa punching bag and the seme is a asshole, also, the art sucks
I wish I had read this review before reading this
HASBHAHA OMG I DID NOT EXPECT THE LAST PART </33 I didnt read it cuz there was so many things adding up like the story has adhd
I don't like the ml, I hate noisy mls like him, let my girl do her thing and shut up
Yes! HONESTLY!!! I hate a man who's so nosey in people's business, I would have been suspicious about how many times they met up.
it's always in female lead stories with annoying men like this, in male stories the females are only there to assist and a support to the MC, but they don't ruin the ML plans or are always inserting themselves in the narrative, but suddenly when it's a FL they need be in their business and "saving" them, like damn, let her cook, she's doing fine, she don't need him, the fun is to see her come up with a plan and revenge, bro should only be arm candy not try to take over the whole show
I feel like the ml is not needed, like if his character was deleted from the story it wouldn't change at all. Someone tell this man he's not the main character so he can sit down