I know we all joke about hope crazy we all are for reading this. Yes it has a LOT of SA. Like 2 decent sex scene. But I also feel it Test the readers empathy and it's not too far off from how messy Old Mythology is. I really love Seth and the ever Turning plot. The is Amazing too. I hope for a happy ending. I hope love how messy but trying father set is
He's trying be be better his son.. I low-key want this to end with set Single and traveling freely but at same time it would be cool Horus was reborn as his ra self. Find meaning in mess, and like Anbuis he may forget set but his Heart remembers. ORISIS NEED I DON'T EVEN KNOW A FUCKING PUNISHMENT WORTHY JUT DO THEM ALL AT ONCE. also may so Yuri with ISIS and the blonde goddess (I'm tired and will not look up names)..... Also the son of Horus ao3 idea would be nice. I don't know where I was going this. But I really enjoyed this. I do feel some SA Could been a little less actually nahhhh. I feel I lot of female rage mother rage and honestly Seth is mother code. Damn...... I don't know I'm just typing. I came for the art left because of the 30 back to back SA chapter and came for the plot and I need to live long enough to see ORISIS defensed. Kill him or dismemberment him and fuck on his grave............... Love you set and Horus has a bit of the tism...... He's too much like me not too
thought it would more sense if Jookyung was mad at Dan for almost off him self and like aggressively taking care of him( hating and having mixed feelings over it because it reminded him of his bio Dad) but when he freak out over the whole thinking Dan actually died but it being some else and him hugging( he start realizing that he doesn't see Dan as a Negative thing like his bio, that he doesn't HAVE to take care of him he wants to) like him not realizing it "love" right away, I mean even with the Coach his Understanding of love is Narrow and almost not existing. He used MMA,POWER MONEY FAME SUCCESS to fill in that Void but it was fleading. Also the whole jinx (my dumbass thought it was going to be a trauma or ex thing or at least like a curse) is just an unhealthy Sex coping mechanism to feel controlled (tho respect for seeing dude use a Bible and going straight to bi but manly gay sex, this man only redeeming quality) , My man may have OCD from his back of control during childhood. Then slow feel frustrated, confused, show childish side and jealously and ALL TAKE SOME FUCKING ACCOUNTABILITY FOR THE R@PE. Like I literally wait 2 years for like a solid long 20 to 30 chapters of them working it out. I really want Dan to be better off and moved on for like 2- 3 chapters that man needs to value himself and FOR THE LOVE OF GOD IN ORDER TO MAKE UP FOR THE RAPE BESIDE SINCERELY APOLOGIZING ALSO HAVE THAT FUCKING DOCTOR FROM DAN ORIGINAL JOB WHO GOT HIM. FIRED AND BEATEN TO AN INCH OF HIS LIFE BY JOOKYUNG. Maybe Jookyung not do a full 180 but be aggressively protective of Dan, and a cute brat only around him. also Jookyung could wear a maid outfit. (●'◡'●)ノ
I honestly don't know how to feel about this. I hope this isn't rushed. He still hasn't realized the weight of what he did. Doctor Dan please don't forgive after like 3 chapters
I need 20 Chapters of guilt, reflection, Dan rejecting him at least once, some Jealous and Bonus if Dan get another better former. (︶︿︶)=凸







"Que mi linda puta de mierda", fue eso lo que yo acabo de leer. ¿Cómo tocó algo tan puro, tan hermoso? Desaparece por una cuanto año con un fin que habito, pero más o menos y lo ruen con esa maldita punta de mierda de diablo. Qué coñazo fue eso. Ahí te dio de de de sácale la palpi y bótalo. Dios creó este mundo y tú lo destrozaste con esa de de de travesura" This made me Sad. And mad. Got me talking in broken New York Taco Bell ...