beta
The story is interesting, but artist lacks some skills in storytelling. Everything feels a bit stuff and unnatural. I hope it will get better
agree
I don't think it's meant to be revealed straightforwardly. It's a mystery and doesn't tell the readers immediately what the story is. Slowly revealing bits of lore. Just have patience and connect it all back. Me personally I like the storyflow. The edging and all
I mean more about storytelling in each frame. Frames feel not alive. But it is getting better
Author is really so talented in storytelling. I am already excited about her future works. I hope they will release more