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This is really taking so much time, idk if I'm the only one feeling like this, but more i read of this, more bored I get. It's like it's in slow-motion. And I've read even longer shounen ai like 19 days or salt friend for example, and still they don't feel like they're in x0,5. I think a major part in the boredom is played by the different couples all being developed at the same time, not that can't be done, but it loses focus if not done well. Maybe if the author focused more on the main couple, it wouldn't feel this empty