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This the first time they draw min young like an angel with bubbly eyes hehe

I pulled an all nighter just for the second lead couple. I like their relationship dynamic and the pace of it. The main couples felt average, slow-burn, predictable, nothing really stood out.

A couple of critiques: the characters’ backstories were poorly unfolded. We never really see how Hyesung struggled and how that led him to self‑harm; Taehyung’s injury, recovery phase, and how he built friendship at the hospital; and the ML’s sister relationship with Taehyung (he mentioned that she helped him in his earlier days, but we only get the surface level). The author tends to drop all the background information on the reader at once instead of letting it emerge naturally, which weakens character depth.

I also noticed that Taehyung and Hyesung have the same face angles in the last chapters, just with different clothing on. I’d like to see some more creative angles, but I’m going to give grace because I don’t know much about the work that goes into this and if the artist is going through things. It’s simply an observation.
Overall, it was an enjoyable read with solid potential, but it could have been much stronger with more organic character development.

The first few chapters were sketchy, I thought it was going to be one of those typical psycho locking up MC, but thankfully it wasn't. Jihun is so precious!! TToTT

This is giving a innocent and fluffy version of Cheol and Min Young (DIMA). I like the characters and their friendship dynamic, but I feel like it was a bit boring/bland and not well written (though it had more potential). There was a lot of boring dialogues that I had to skip through. The manipulative guy from the beginning was introduced and left quite randomly. The Uncle was another random add in as well as MC's interest in music. MC's parents came off with very strong traditional vibes but just accepts the fact that he's gay (??) with no resistance against it is very questionable.

This author makes amazing stories. I hope s/he can create a longer manga. This feels like a softer version of BWAT

This chapter feels like someone is twisting my insides tighter and tighter as I'm reading each scene. Min Young, Min young, Minyoung... (heavy sigh), but I get it. Honestly they both pushed each other to their own limits and cornered each other. Hence the result was ultimately both getting hurt.

sooo when is it going to be Subaru and Saku's turn to kiss

It doesn't take a smart person to figure out that family is not ppl who beat you up, shame on you and wish on your downfall even if you share the same blood. Whatever, hate on Min Young for killing ur fucked up family cause it's not like ur in a better place with them alive. Your dad will never be the father you want him to be so wake tf up bro

What a twist of fate! But if I went through the same thing, I think I could forgive them both. They were teens: Squall pressured/tricked from his father. Jack lost his mother, sought out help, just to be ignored by her father hence why he wanted revenge (not saying these are excuses for them) plus the ultimatum to die or make the potion. At the end of the day, if I was given to live one more life, I would not want to keep living in the past and indulging in hate. I don't think this was well written, but wasn't the worst I've read.

I've re-read this 6/7 times and why did I just realized that MinJun (green head) possibly has a crush on MC? Tell me if it's correct cuz they mentioned it in one of the panel but I'm not sure if it was just a joke