I pulled an all nighter just for the second lead couple. I like their relationship dynamic and the pace of it. The main couples felt average, slow-burn, predictable, nothing really stood out.
A couple of critiques: the characters’ backstories were poorly unfolded. We never really see how Hyesung struggled and how that led him to self‑harm; Taehyung’s injury, recovery phase, and how he built friendship at the hospital; and the ML’s sister relationship with Taehyung (he mentioned that she helped him in his earlier days, but we only get the surface level). The author tends to drop all the background information on the reader at once instead of letting it emerge naturally, which weakens character depth.
I also noticed that Taehyung and Hyesung have the same face angles in the last chapters, just with different clothing on. I’d like to see some more creative angles, but I’m going to give grace because I don’t know much about the work that goes into this and if the artist is going through things. It’s simply an observation.
Overall, it was an enjoyable read with solid potential, but it could have been much stronger with more organic character development.
This is giving a innocent and fluffy version of Cheol and Min Young (DIMA). I like the characters and their friendship dynamic, but I feel like it was a bit boring/bland and not well written (though it had more potential). There was a lot of boring dialogues that I had to skip through. The manipulative guy from the beginning was introduced and left quite randomly. The Uncle was another random add in as well as MC's interest in music. MC's parents came off with very strong traditional vibes but just accepts the fact that he's gay (??) with no resistance against it is very questionable.








Hope I make it to May 2027
Whut.. that’s so far fml