idk if it's well written but heck it pisses me off sm eugh my heart genuinely aches when they don't shut their traps and uhhhh, i think they should look out for themselves first. both look like a big hot mess ļ¼ļæ£ćøļæ£ļ¼ pushing their 30s yet still canāt properly express their feelings. i mean, not that itās something they HAVE to do, but they just pmo so much like bro, itās obvious blondie likes him because who in their right mind would call their āonly friendā their lifeline? (he didnāt actually say that, but saying āi canāt breathe without youā basically makes it sound like heās only living because black haired boi is alive) and seriously, how long are they gonna stay like that so I canbut put this on hold haha
i actually felt everything they're saying and it gave me absolute goosebumps lol. but i lowk hoped they gave us more angst like mao leaving in chapter 6,,, and the thing i disliked was that mao was the only one who CLEARLY realized that he's in love with the TWO of them. like i yearn for poly relationships with them loving the other equally while being loud about it ok? sorry but i am a very needy person lmao. such a good read though!










the sex scenes are just so perfect love it sm ! see u next season