damn i got a jumpscare at the beginning of the chap, for a sec there i thought he was raping her,
anyway i dont like where this is going, it's a porn plot, it's not realistic and this bdsm thing going on there rubbed me the wrong way like... i do like such stuff but this was a bit :) pornish and unrealistic and unappealing
um wtf is going on, this chapter made me change my mind like wdym a lollipop.... and wdym he pierced her ears on the spot... whose weird fantasies are those cus wtf
she is such a terrible dom, i feel like this was written by a person who doesn't understand shit ab bdsm, she is an awful person, god anything she says is annoying me on a different level, the plot is one big misunderstanding, one she did on purpose out of her own selfishness and i couldn't give less f as of why, bc her personality is trashy af, she doesn't care about the feelings of the ml at all, only thinks ab herself and gets irritated when he is trying to communicate like wtf girl are you a teenager, i hate it, i tried to finish this but i haven't seen such a trashy bdsm in a looong time, like ig this is a smut and one shouldn't care much ab the plot but the smut ain't even that good, at this point i think this whole shit is a rage bait
i expected this to end with the mc dead after falling from the hill but THERE IS A BUT and now we are here
lol the line about the ankles... Strumming my pain with his fingers
Singing my life with his words
Killing me softly with his song
Killing me softly