beta
am i the only one who feels like i lost brain cells reading this? smut was great! no notes. but the plot…
idk maybe i shouldn’t read into it and enjoy the hot fictional men
where is the character development, bc it FEELS LIKE WE’RE FUCKING REGRESSING.
idk man. be better. free me from this (bc i will unfortunately come back). do something. anything other than this.
None existed basically. Character development who? Where? What? How?
he will be the psycho through the whole passion series but he's gonna be down bad for taeui
istg ts rape wasn't necessary but okay man that's ilay riegrow WBK