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kale June 19, 2021 12:39 pm

I’m actually okay with harems as long as there is a buildup to each relationship

But dang I’m getting whiplash by how fast hes going.

kale June 18, 2021 4:53 am

I think it’s better to wait and see how this goes. But the first 5-6 chapters got me feeling like its really similar to “Lady Baby” in terms of how they portray the ages. I mean I do understand that this girl is a 300 year old witch that wants to get stronger but… things just don’t make sense

It seems a bit rushed with how she’s literally one 1 year old and they expect her to make a coherent decision that would impact whether she lives or dies in a version Game of Thrones but with 5 year olds. Also the fact that there conveniently appears to be a necromancer at her feet when picking a … “sword” (the fact that she speaks caveman is hilarious tho but kinda like…why?) Concept is a cliche but I love cliches. Delivery isn’t the best. ( ̄へ ̄)

Very reminiscent of how many of the “transmigrated into a child” stories that end up having low ratings because the buildup of how she regains strength is very rushed. In this case, she has a new body as well as new mana levels (now with 5 star mana compared to 2). Kinda also reminds me of how in Chinese Manhuas the naming is pretty similar.

Sorry for the text dump but I wanted to see if anyone else had a similar thought. Feel free to reply about anything you agree or disagree bc I live for analysis like these. Gonna keep reading and see if anything changes. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

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