That was... Underwhelming. I'm not really that particular when it comes to stories. I just want to be entertained by a lovely romance. But wow the plot was ROUGH. And that's how it wrapped up? Did that make any sense at all? No. Not really. I'm glad they got back together and such, but the ride was a bit to disjointed for my liking.
Just wondering if there's a reason so many uploaders spell the word BONUS with an extra u. I even googled it to see if it's one of those words that's spelled differently in UK English or something. I can't find any evidence of that. But it's a LOT of different uploaders, from what I have seen. Am I missing something?










The typesetting drove me insane. First of all, em-dashes (—) and underscores (_) aren't the same thing. Second, just because the original Japanese has a long vertical line doesn't mean you need an equally long horizontal line in English. They're different languages with different punctuation rules. Third, pick a font. Hell, pick 5 fonts. (Preferably ones that are easy to read!) Don't pick 863 different fonts! And the font choices were TERRIBLE. OMG.
The story itself was meh for me. A boss that has slept with most of his employees is a *bit* troubling to say the least.... And I wasn't really feeling any chemistry between the two. It seemed more like the uke was used to being taken advantage of and was just desperate to be acknowledged by anyone. The seme came along and was like, "Yo, you did the work, so you should get the credit..... *kiss kiss*" and the uke rolled over.