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The typesetting drove me insane. First of all, em-dashes (—) and underscores (_) aren't the same thing. Second, just because the original Japanese has a long vertical line doesn't mean you need an equally long horizontal line in English. They're different languages with different punctuation rules. Third, pick a font. Hell, pick 5 fonts. (Preferably ones that are easy to read!) Don't pick 863 different fonts! And the font choices were TERRIBLE. OMG.
The story itself was meh for me. A boss that has slept with most of his employees is a *bit* troubling to say the least.... And I wasn't really feeling any chemistry between the two. It seemed more like the uke was used to being taken advantage of and was just desperate to be acknowledged by anyone. The seme came along and was like, "Yo, you did the work, so you should get the credit..... *kiss kiss*" and the uke rolled over.