This gives petty sibling rivalry that goes too far. The MC and the step sister are alike. Both fighting for affection, typical siblings stuff depending on who you ask but this is an Villianess story so I expected the MC to do some villain like shit lol. Hell I would’ve been mad if she didn’t. Only thing I didn’t like was how Oscar was used, he was treated like yesterday’s trash.
Was chapter 98 really needed. A whole ass stabbing? Seriously? For fucks sake can Dan catch a fucking break. Why do he have to be broken over and over again? It pisses me off that he’s going through all this shit. It’s to the point that even if they get to together and confess their love it won’t mean anything. The feels won’t be there because itll be like someone saying “yeah I killed your mom but I love you so let’s be together”. After that much pain and trauma I just can’t see how the author will wrap this up properly that won’t leave me pissed. There’s other ways to show growth that fucking Dan over time and time again.
no trust me diva it's gonna be so worth it to have this entirely unrealistic 1 dimensional character be an abuse sponge just to see a 6'4" man with a third arm stop emotionally abusing him for 20 chapters and maybe (OMG) smile(?!) at him oNCE?! i luv queer media (-: being a fujoshi is suffering yes i will be back to read
Even though I wish she didn’t grow a dick. I feel like it’s not needed for a straight couple. I could see if this was yuri, then there would be a need for a penis but there was a perfectly good penis not being used lol and might I add it wasn’t small like omegas usually are. I just wish they would’ve let the omega top and have it be satisfying enough for both since they’re alpha/omega and male/female. It’s a good story and definitely worth the read though (I’m just nitpicking since it was good enough to not have anything else to critique lol)!
That just takes away the entire point of the female being an alpha and man an omega trope. The entire reason, the omegaverse was made, was for men to be pregnant, as well as that the roles of bottom and top are strictly in placed. While I agree, it would be fun to read them switching, the concept of having a female alpha is taken away then. (no hate to you, just wanted to rant.)
Here’s why. Let’s put the rape and his feelings about that aside (since those feelings are valid af and has nothing to do with why I think he’s trash). He’s trash because he picked this young boy up off the street, never even tried to get to know him, paraded him around to his family, he was in there being a whole ass house husband cooking and cleaning, and fucked him. He never questioned the mc or made him feel like shit for using him but the moment the ml is having a rough time with his own trauma since you know it’s hard to lay all your trauma out, you kick him out and was damn near going to kill the baby because YOU didn’t take the time to get to know him. Was he out of pocket for trying to mark the MC in exchange for his trauma ABSOLUTELY but to treat him like yesterday trash was insane.The way he made himself the victim of their situationshop blew me. They both rushed into the situation. He had MONTHS before the pregnancy to get to know the ML, but he didn’t because he was using him. It’s crazy how the only thing he asked the ML about himself was about his family but what about the person in front of him? Was he not interested to ask about likes, dislikes, hobbies etc? No one should be forced to spill their trauma until they’re ready. The ML only told him to keep him (even though the trauma wasn’t that serious it was serious enough to the ML). The MC was selfish from beginning to close to the end since he did get his act together at the VERY end










Did they really just try to pull a “we both fucked up” at the end. Fuck no!!!! Wtf did Doc Dan do that was even CLOSE to the bs he was put through? I know tf this author didn’t. Wasn’t no they both fucked up the most damage Dan did was to himself trying to be next to that fucker. Absolutely fucking not. Idc idc I just cannot overlook everything. He should’ve gotten with that blonde. Downvote me, I said what I said.