Overall, I thought this was cute and entertaining. Both Jinhyung and Jiwoo are fighting people who are polar opposites to their powers. Both just started the fight and are warming up - it takes only master of fighting to know how to defeat an enemy in 3 seconds but even they don't strike recklessly.
Jiwoo is fighting a spider type fighter. Who is 20x stronger than any of the fighters he has before (except for the last fight with the disciple of creepy red guy and the disciple of the grandfather) which means it's going to take time to get his groove. He's learning his lessons through the fight.
Jinhyung has it worse as she needs to both fight and protect Jiwoo as she both loves him and he's kayden's disciple and her brothers friend. So she can get distracted because she's never had these feelings for someone before. Fighting both of you!!
My thoughts on whose gonna win? I think they will both leave with scars and bruises. Both I think they'll win or the challengers will fall back.
Its all about communication and all three of them are terrible at it. The uke isn't even in love with the other seme (from the one he already liked) but was coerced into having intercourse with him. The seme that he likes also is an assaulter (the uke said no but he continues anyways).
They all need to have a seat and actually talk about what makes them into each other and the best form of communication between them cuz this hurts to watch as a person who is poly myself. This is just annoying but also poorly written.
Will I still read this tho? Yes, I need to find out what happens in the end.
Stop/No = Stop sex immeadiately and check on your partner!! Consent is key guys!!
If the answer is not a definite yes, its a No!!









Mc is so cute and i love the pacing. Ml gots trauma and pookie pick me cuz imma hug u to bits!
Fucking love oscar, hes so cute.
I don't like gray... he's forcing his feelings onto someone whose married and said no multiple times...