I think it could have been better. I personally don’t think it was that bad, I kinda like how FL is quite rational and didn’t rely on what she knew alone but also gather information. However, the story was rushed, especially towards the end… We barely see them developing their feelings. And ML didn’t do much at all lol
The early chapters make me anxious for some reason. Ngl, I had a very very low expectation in the beginning, so it was better than I initially thought. Still, not sure if it's the panel, the translation, or the flow (or everything) It was kinda off, rushed, and issues were glossed over. The story might be better if the explanation/expression, how things were portrayed, or the flow of the story were better.











Why does it have to be cancelled (/TДT)/
It’s fun and I like her brother (/TДT)/