The story needs rewriting. The art style is good, and the overall idea is interesting, but it feels chaotic and cliché. Several parts are missing, and there is no story development just too straightforward. …
I got a bad second hand embarrassment in the first chapters but the story line is good and the video call sex was fire… they normally only do voice call scenes in bl
I tried to read this but I am quitting on ch 8 bc literally wtf… first of all they are siblings… second he is molesting his older brother… and what with the hypnosis or whatever that shit called… it doesn’t work like this… anyway if you like this u seriously need some help
The story needs rewriting. The art style is good, and the overall idea is interesting, but it feels chaotic and cliché. Several parts are missing, and there is no story development just too straightforward. …