Honestly I'd like to say that this is well written. But so many things just don't make sense. I understand how Theo was forced out of his home because of his stepmother, but if you TRULY cared about your little sister then don't you think you would have come home for vacations at least? Or at least snuck back home after she literally had DIED? Or when she was KIDNAPPED? I even read some spoilers that he didn't even show up for his sister's 18th birthday. Jesus man. I understand being in love with Ramona and wanting to be with her. But bro. YOUR little SISTER was by HERSELF for years, being abused, manipulated, life threatened by every side. And you had the first prince by your side and Ramona while your sister truly had no one. He is actually the better way to put it. The WORST brother is Theo 100%. He is a COWARD. and even Ramona called his own actions out. Do you know how much of a coward you have to be that the girl that youre in love with has to be the one to call you out? Not even just that but it seems shes been paying more mind to his sister then her OWN brother has been??? Make it make sense?? Also it doesnt divulge into her trauma of being left alone and literally DYING twice as much as NEED BE. I get that FL is a smart and a cunning woman. But I'm sorry being killed twice isn't just something that she could just gloss over (unless your theo). Tbh this story has potential. I just REALLY don't understand the dynamics between Theo and his sister. When he is being painted as this kind and loving brother when he doesnt even meet the BASIC standard of even showing up. (Why didn't he even TRY going to her funeral??? HELLO??) or even not listening to Ramona? She stated she just wants to be a knight and yet you listen to the first prince and his ideas more then the opinions of the woman you so call love? And the the sister being glossed over in EVERY aspect. *sigh*
Damn he’s that bad huh Imma try it out cuz im bored, but yk the saying, you’ll only feel betrayed/let down if you had expectations to begin with (or smth like that) so…I’ll just see how it goes with an open mind lol ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Damn he’s that bad huh Imma try it out cuz im bored, but yk the saying, you’ll only feel betrayed/let down if you had expectations to begin with (or smth like that) so…I’ll just see how it goes with an ... Ruby
If youre bored then I dont think it will be a bad read just personally I have older brothers and I am an older sibling so if my younger siblings literally died I dont care WHO I got to fight I will be at their funeral best believe
I have reread this so many times and the art is so beautiful and the father daughter bond is SO WHOLESOME I really need to read the novel because im impatient:,)
Honestly I'd like to say that this is well written. But so many things just don't make sense. I understand how Theo was forced out of his home because of his stepmother, but if you TRULY cared about your little sister then don't you think you would have come home for vacations at least? Or at least snuck back home after she literally had DIED? Or when she was KIDNAPPED? I even read some spoilers that he didn't even show up for his sister's 18th birthday. Jesus man. I understand being in love with Ramona and wanting to be with her. But bro. YOUR little SISTER was by HERSELF for years, being abused, manipulated, life threatened by every side. And you had the first prince by your side and Ramona while your sister truly had no one. He is actually the better way to put it. The WORST brother is Theo 100%. He is a COWARD. and even Ramona called his own actions out. Do you know how much of a coward you have to be that the girl that youre in love with has to be the one to call you out? Not even just that but it seems shes been paying more mind to his sister then her OWN brother has been??? Make it make sense?? Also it doesnt divulge into her trauma of being left alone and literally DYING twice as much as NEED BE. I get that FL is a smart and a cunning woman. But I'm sorry being killed twice isn't just something that she could just gloss over (unless your theo). Tbh this story has potential. I just REALLY don't understand the dynamics between Theo and his sister. When he is being painted as this kind and loving brother when he doesnt even meet the BASIC standard of even showing up. (Why didn't he even TRY going to her funeral??? HELLO??) or even not listening to Ramona? She stated she just wants to be a knight and yet you listen to the first prince and his ideas more then the opinions of the woman you so call love? And the the sister being glossed over in EVERY aspect. *sigh*
Damn he’s that bad huh
Imma try it out cuz im bored, but yk the saying, you’ll only feel betrayed/let down if you had expectations to begin with (or smth like that) so…I’ll just see how it goes with an open mind lol ╮(￣▽￣)╭
If youre bored then I dont think it will be a bad read just personally I have older brothers and I am an older sibling so if my younger siblings literally died I dont care WHO I got to fight I will be at their funeral best believe