Guys how can they communicate IF FROM THE VERY START THEY ALREADY HAVE SOME MISUNDERSTANDING!!!
If you look at ch1, jaeha's description of their marriage sounds sooo awful, but reading the chapters after that you can see how Taegeon may... actually have some feelings for him, but mc is:
• emotionally dense.
• assume taegeon's feelings and thoughts (tbh his thought process is understandable...)
• is having his first love in THIRTY YEARS OF LIVING
• thoroughly believes that he forced taegeon into marriage
• taegeon has a legitimate reason to hate his ass (yooshin group's shit behavior) with no reason to like him, so obviously Jaeha's gonna assume that Taegeon don't like him!!! Or at least is tolerating him idk
Now on Taegeon's side:
• believes that Jaeha don't like him (Jaeha said so when proposing..)
• doesn't know jaeha's reason for marrying him
• probaby think he's the reason Jaeha is traumatized and want to divorce (kidnapped, attempted rape, assault)
And also, this dude disappear for 1 month after their marriage, and 6 months after the kidnapping. I understand that he's in a gang and probably need to tie some loose knots, but really? 7 months? If you want to show how much you (probably) like him, at least be present...(Aside from fucking his ass)
Anyway, Im not frustrated! I actually like these kind of stories~
But wanting them to just immediately communicate shit out is ? when u can clearly see the factors that make them knee-deep in the said shit.
Going slow is the best with how much this people don't clearly say their feelings. CONSIDERING THEY JUST MET!!!! And they went straight to marriange like idiots
Dude Oto's family is annoying asf as fuck,,, How can they even call themselves a "family" if every member is just treated as disposable pawn for its success?
And they have such a conservative way of thinking bruh, they're treating omegas like a breeding machine that doesn't deserve a place if they can't have babies!!!
It was an okay read! But one thing that did pissed me off is just how they're both kind of inconsiderate of each other's situation?
The top knew that Hye-on was in some kind of shady business, but this kid just can't sit still. And Hey-on knew that the top love him so much, but he just keep ignoring the dude's feelings,,,
I do wish we at least could've seen Kaz's wife, even a single panel of them smiling at each other happily at their wedding would've been enough!
And also there were a lot of plot that weren't properly finished off. What happened to the miyamura gang, the drug business, the cop dude? Why did the cops entered the scene and arrested Hye-on despite saying "let it go"?
Despite all the bravado and scary image the author built around Renge, he didn't even lasted an hour in he fight! He died kind of pathetically, too. For a gang that's competing with a large yakuza, I expected more people and more action scenes. Renge fighting with a sword surrounded by guns would've been cool asf.
I felt like the author had a clear purpose for each character, but failed to expand and maximize them. The cop dude was basically thrown away after that call with the top, and Kaz was just brought up again when the author needed a reason for the main characters to return to Japan.
And also i cant help but feel a bit uncomfortable in the scene where Hye-on treated the top as a whore. I feel like the author only put that in the story so they can have sex?
Overall it had a nice decent plot, the characters felt a little bit too shallow and feels like they're following a stereotype when making an action, the relationship between the main characters were sweet! But the story definitely could have developed a bit more, be more intense and angsty.! ^^










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